What sounds better as a title?
I’m writing a spin-off (or something) of Peter Pan where an 18 year old dies and is sent to Neverland. Peter is assigned to new comers and shows her this seemingly perfect place. This story is set in 2019, 115 years after he met Wendy. He still thinks about her a lot, but when Ellie turns up, he realises he’s not thinking about Wendy anymore…
Please comment your thoughts!
My Little Library 📚
Title: Hot Line
Genre(s): Short Story / Romance / Humour
Summary: In which a guy calls a sex hotline just looking for a friend.
Rating: 💚💚💚💚(See my Reviews Ratings post for more details)
My review of Hot Line:
At the beginning of the story Evan’s ex girlfriend cheats on him and when he calls the hotline both Evan and Tee find solace in each other.I loved this story; it was serious at times, but then had lots of laugh-out-loud moments as well, which I enjoyed too.
This short story is told through phone calls and text messages, which is unique in itself and the love between the two characters is just beautiful and I loved all their conversations. Evan and Tee (Teegan) are beautiful people inside and out.
I recommend this story to everyone. 💚
I was wondering if any of you would be willing to review one of my books?
Obviously I would read and honestly review one of your books in return.
What do you think?
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Enjoy your reading! 💚
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Lainey’s green eyes watered
as she saw a certain blue-eyed
talking to the most attractive
boy she’d ever seen.
Taylor, seeing Lainey’s
obvious pain, said a polite
goodbye to the bewildered
boy and walked towards her
friend with open arms.
Lainey’s soft mint green
eyes gazed at Taylor.
She just simply couldn’t take her eyes
off the pastel purple-haired girl with
the beautiful deep blue eyes and she
thought about how Taylor’s giggles
highlighted the freckles on her cute nose.
Unknown to Lainey
Taylor thought about her too;
Her stunning green eyes;
Her light golden brown hair and
how Lainey’s laugh brightened
Title: (You Make Me) Spill My Ink
By: Mona Soorma AKA Manic Sylph
Genre(s): Poetry / Dairy / Journal
Summary: The dance of the Poet and the Muse is rather fascinating, a gorgeous and mystical precursor to the creative effort. This book , the diary of a poet by Mona Soorma a.k.a. Manic Sylph, takes you on a journey to the beautiful inner world of imagination and creation.
Rating: 💚💚💚💚 (See my Reviews Ratings post for more details)
My review of (You Make Me) Spill My Ink:
Mona Soorma’s way of formatting these poems into dairy entries, that allow her to talk to her muse, is wonderful. She gives you a feeling of peace when reading her poetry and since it’s set in the months of the year you really get a feeling of the seasons rolling into another and when her muse strikes the most.
I’ve never read about someone personifying their muse in such a unique way as Mona has done:
“It’s my pen, but I write in your ink…”
“I flow out of you and you flow into me in scrawls of flowing ink…”
These examples are just the beginning of her well-written poems. This book really is a poetry collection as all the poems just work so well together. Also the word choice (“…pull me into your luminous oceans of creativity?”) gives the book a sense of magic. ❤️
Overall, I believe that the writing is beautiful and dreamy.
I highly recommend this poetry collection. 💚
My book finally arrived!
I love it 😊
It’s soo beautiful 😍